songwriting
Oct 22nd, 2010 |
By Paul |
Category: Lyrics, Prose & Poetry, songwriting
Last Fish In the Ocean . It’s closing time The lights are flashing we’re the last two fish Swimming in this ocean Think I’ll cast out a line See if you bite I’m diving deep for someone tonight . You’re The last fish in the ocean The last catch of the day The last chance [...]
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Oct 8th, 2009 |
By admin |
Category: Lyrics, songwriting
Mr Perfect She’s been chasin’ Mr Perfect for almost all her life love’s come and gone been lost and won she’s ain’t nobodies wife her bio-bomb is tickin’, she’s almost had her run she knows she’d better find him soon or it’s over and done She’s always known precisely what he needs to be muscles [...]
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Jul 10th, 2009 |
By admin |
Category: songwriting, video
Paul J Penton performing with the Fabulous Tesoriero Brothers at Open Studio Northcote – July 8 2009
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Jul 7th, 2009 |
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Category: songwriting
First lyric draft – hear the current draft here … http://pauljpenton.com/demos Not exactly sure what I did next, but probably a bit of brainstorming- seeing if I could find connections etc- but certainly the ‘autumn mornings biting’ and the ‘shadows stretching ’til noon’ idea wanted to come together. Here’s a first lyric draft… not quite [...]
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Jun 28th, 2009 |
By admin |
Category: songwriting
The next dash of salty inspiration from the muse was when I had to get that first ‘extra’ doona/blanket/cover after the first night with a seasonal chill. Here’s my random train of thought: Autumn mornings start to bite have to pull those covers tight bring you in even closer it might be a nasty winter [...]
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Jun 28th, 2009 |
By admin |
Category: songwriting
I recently had a song of mine -Another Perfect Morning Critiqued at a seminar by none other than Mr Pat Pattison himself- generally he liked the song – as did the crowd – and made some suggestions for improvement- I thought it would be interesting to document the initial inspirations and ideas and see how [...]
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